Hardcore

Okay well
I would appreciate if people would read my poems and give really good constructive critisism
plz no one liners
I would like them to be farely long
plz and thx
kaila
p.s. I will return the favor

Ok lets do 5 for 5 and call it a deal. I promise I will be as cridical as I can be Plot121

please read

Black Dog
Legalized Pusher
What We Share
Broken By You
What The Hell

Will do and thx so much

Okie dokie.
Will you rate and comment on my
Echoes
??
Thankies :]