Up To {Twenty} Constructive Comments!

A lot of my poems aren't getting critism. We can't have this.
So. I put them in order from the ones I really would like done, to the least.
`Do as many as you like and I'll double it.
`Leave titles.
`No love or friendship.
`Enjoy yourself.
`NO one liners. Tell me WHY you like or dislike the poem.
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Titles:
01. Just Like a Firefly {Double La'Tuin}
02. False Pretence {Triolet}
03. The Song I Swore to Never Sing
04. Dreaming of You { Senryu Quintuplet}
05. Rise Above The Stench
06. Maximum of Twelve Days {Ottava Rima}
07. Stupify Your Lies {Terzanelle}
08. You're the Voice Inside My Head {Ottava Rima}
09. Jump Up! and Pour on the Syrup {Terzanelle}
10. Mad Ex-Girlfriends {Terzanelle}
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xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

[[Keep in mind I'm still catching up with other comments, so bare with me. I'll get them done; the summer's coming up! =)]]

Pcha.
Anyone? =/
I'll get to these my Monday or Tuesday [today I have a lot of final catching up to do and Monday I have marching band. So.]

Come on.. It's a good deal!

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I did the song i swore to never sing...
(i like songs...=D)
i had done Mary's song in your other post...
if you want to do a couple more of mine, i'd appreciate some feedback on my firsts...
=) =)

^^^
Leave me four titles, and I'd be glad!
No love or friendship, though. =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex