Graduation Poem

I'm not one to request readers or comments but I have just finished writing a graduation poem for my class of 2007. I would like some feedback because it is very important to me and will be presented to my peers.

I appreciate honesty..and I'll return the favor :]

Hey..me pls!!..i'll brb after doing yours..
Could u do my latest **You're mine**...thn alot!
xxPoojaxx