Honest Feedback

Hey everyone,

I would appreciate some honest feedback in any of my latest poems.
By latest i mean well any from my last 10 or so..
Anyways i want HONEST feedback. I dont mind if you think its totally rubbish. Your oppinion is your own. But just tell me why you think its rubbish. So yeah be nasty as you want. Critercism will help me improve.

In return ill do any of your poems. Sorry im not going to do my usual deal becuase i dont have time. But yeah ill return the comment. So 1 for 1, 2 for 2 etc..
Leave titles if you want specific poems doing.
No explicit poems please.
If you want me to vote tell me otherwise i wont.

Thanks in advance.
xx

I've r/r/c 3 of your poems and they were all nicely done, could you please do my 3 poems called:

Life
A Million Things
The Innocence of youth

Thanks

Done.
Thanks for the comments you guys.
And GodsGift i noticed your a Man Utd supporter. You have good taste. :D

xx

Anyone else?

Done everyones.
Thanks for comments.
xx

ANyone else please?

Okay!!! i did one of your latest, i wish i could do more but i don't have time. please do any of mine that catches your eye

thx so much
xxxgabriella

Okie dokie, artichokey.
Will you do
Her Majesty
Hello, Little Girl
Carry That Weight
And
Fantasy
I would glad to do four of yours :]

Done everyones.
Thanks for comments.
xx

Anyone else?

Id appreciate it if you gave me honest feedback on "Crucify" as its only recieve one liners.

Anyone??