DEAL!

1for1, 2for2

tell me how my poems make you feel, what thoughts they provoke. no literary comments,or poetic rhetoric, nothing about my flow. the way you feel. what u think about. what u visualise. comments under 3 lines or that contain things i said i dont want. WILL NOT RECIEVE COMMENTS BACK. leave me tittles of somthing that will make me think, somthing that will make me feel. nothing cliche. if you can manage, you will be the newest addition to my F list.

Tom

Okie dokie.
Will you do the same thing
For my
Her Majesty
Carry That Weight
And
Hello, Little Girl
??
Gladly appreciate it.

No one else?

shoot.