Something new- favors returned times 4

I have made my first attempt of writting a poem, that didn't ryhme. please tell me what I am doing wrong. I could use a little help. Thanks in advance, I will return favors times four. please leave titles, and please vote.
*My Hunger for Death

Done, please rate and comment

Tell The Truth
Love Is/ My Love
and
anyother two of my poems that you have not read yet.

Thanks:)