I need some constructive criticism please.

Name : The Black Angel Lloyd Rose
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Apr 4, 2006
Posts : 226

Its been a while since i have written anything, probably over a year. the new poem i wrote "next life" is the only one i have written since i went to jail. please tell me if i have slipped any and where my mistakes lie. if none, please say so. also, please rate. thanks.

- Name : Narphangu
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : May 1, 2007
- Posts : 2895
Narphangu
18 years ago

I read and rated it.
Whee.

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- Name : The Black Angel Lloyd Rose
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Apr 4, 2006
- Posts : 226
The Black Angel Lloyd Rose
18 years ago

Thankx. anyone else, please feel free.

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- Name : Narphangu
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Narphangu
18 years ago

No problem, anytime!
=D

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I need some constructive criticism please.