PLEASE HELP ME OUT

IT WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED. I have some poems that I would like someone or anyone to review and comment.. just let me know if I am on the right path here. thanks. I will do 3 for 1. :) thanks.

I've r/r/c on 2 of your poems and they were great, could you please r/r/c my poems called:

The dentist
My Never Ending Dream
Undesirable Reality
Temptations Angry Flame

Please and thanks GG23

Done, please r/r/c

Goodbye Pain
You Stole My Heart
and
You Said

Thanks:)