In need of feedback

  • stefanie
    18 years ago

    I have two new poems.

    if you comment on them, and i mean really comment on them, i do the same back.

    i would really appreciate it.

    thank you

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    On My Way Sweetie.

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Okie dokie :]

  • Chad Picard
    18 years ago

    Done! (Wonderful pieces, btw)

    a couple of mine:

    The Revisionist
    Reforgery

    :)

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Done! i wud lyk u to read 2 of my v first poems ' rules r rules' n ' blocked b da way' thanx

  • xxSnow Angelxx
    18 years ago

    Brb after doing yours..
    Could u do my latest
    "I want you to know"
    "You're mine"

    Thnx a lot
    xxPoojaxx