I'm newby.. Please give me some suggestions and comments ^^

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    I just post 3 poems...
    My last words
    Corruptor and farmer
    Grateful friend
    Please give me some suggestions and comments for better poem.. ^^
    Thx..//

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    Ill have a little look. Please look at The bodys Rain. Thank you xxx alex xxx