Poeple say...........

People say this poem sucks becuse It's short and stupid
here it is

Don't Cry

Now it's time to go to bed
I pray for mommy to rest my head
I pray for my daddy
not to weep
because I lie in my coffin asleep
Please buddy
do not cry
It's not my fault I had to die
Please tell Grandma
I'm in heven to stay
Please tell papal remember to pray
Please tell teddy,
I'm resting my head, lying in my coffin peacefully in bed.

Umm i would just like to know who said that sucks? I mean that was actually one of the best short poems I've read Lol..that was good don't listen to them haters..their only trying to bring you down

very good

It's a great poem adn I have to agree one of the best shortest ones Ive read, but still you have to wonder if ever having someone pass away in my faimily this year ( my third oldest brother) if thats what they would say when their looking down on us watching. excellent poem.