Ely – Two for Two :)

  • Fluffy
    18 years ago

    I know this is a crap deal. But I am bored. So. Tough.

    Open strictly to the first seven people who post here.

    I do not appreciate and nor do I respond to one liner's. So don't be an idiot and comment saying: "ur soo gr8, rate mi poems!" - because it won't happen. If you don't like honest feedback, then this most certainly isn't a deal for you.

    I only have six poems. So. Go nuts when choosing your two.

    Enjoy :).

  • Simple Sensation
    18 years ago

    K ill do them.

    Could you please do;

    - At the Mourning Palace
    - Greatest Genaration?

    Thanks
    xx

  • Fluffy
    18 years ago

    Will do, dude. But you must forgive me- and this is a note to you all - I will not be here often due to examinations next week. But I will have your poems commented on soon.

    Thank you :)

  • Fluffy
    18 years ago

    Perfectly Imperfect, your poems have been read. :)

  • Miu
    18 years ago

    Done:)
    Could you do:
    Eyes will never meet.
    Strong enough.

    Thank you! :)

  • Fluffy
    18 years ago

    Miu your poems have been read.

  • Fluffy
    18 years ago

    Wow. You people really are crap.

    Fine. I'm extending this for the next 15 people who are willing to view my poetry. I have now only two exams to study for so I'll be offering honest criticism for anyone who asks.

    It's still a 'two for two' offer. I'd extend that...but I'm not currently in the mood.

    Salam.x

  • Debbie
    18 years ago

    Friends, you should check out Ms. Ely's poems.

    They're, in fact, works of a genius.

    (^^,)

    I'm not even kidding!

  • Fluffy
    18 years ago

    Aww, thank you dearest! :)

    Black Illusion, your poems have been read :) (I must say, they are quite excellent!) :)