Ely – Two for Two :)

I know this is a crap deal. But I am bored. So. Tough.

Open strictly to the first seven people who post here.

I do not appreciate and nor do I respond to one liner's. So don't be an idiot and comment saying: "ur soo gr8, rate mi poems!" - because it won't happen. If you don't like honest feedback, then this most certainly isn't a deal for you.

I only have six poems. So. Go nuts when choosing your two.

Enjoy :).

K ill do them.

Could you please do;

- At the Mourning Palace
- Greatest Genaration?

Thanks
xx

Will do, dude. But you must forgive me- and this is a note to you all - I will not be here often due to examinations next week. But I will have your poems commented on soon.

Thank you :)

Perfectly Imperfect, your poems have been read. :)

Done:)
Could you do:
Eyes will never meet.
Strong enough.

Thank you! :)

Miu your poems have been read.

Wow. You people really are crap.

Fine. I'm extending this for the next 15 people who are willing to view my poetry. I have now only two exams to study for so I'll be offering honest criticism for anyone who asks.

It's still a 'two for two' offer. I'd extend that...but I'm not currently in the mood.

Salam.x

Friends, you should check out Ms. Ely's poems.

They're, in fact, works of a genius.

(^^,)

I'm not even kidding!

Aww, thank you dearest! :)

Black Illusion, your poems have been read :) (I must say, they are quite excellent!) :)