The Night of the Worst Sin of all Sins [1 for 2]

  • Anaisthitos
    18 years ago

    Could you please r/r/c my poem 'The Night of the Worst Sin of all Sins'?

    In return I will rate 2 of yours

    No 1 liners, please. If you do 1 liners I'll give a 1 liner back.
    Please be honest, tell me if there's a part I could improve on
    Rate, too, please!

    Post the names of the poems if you want specific ones.

    Thanks! =)

  • Anaisthitos
    18 years ago

    Anybody?

  • Karl Wild GG23
    18 years ago

    I read your poem and voted it as well, it was done very nicely, could you please r/r/c my poems called"

    My Never Ending Dream
    The Dentist

    Please and Thanks

    P.S. please don't forget to vote.

    GG23

  • Anaisthitos
    18 years ago

    Anybody else?