Newbie write fifth poem "Depressed flower" ^^

Please read and give comments or suggestions on my
Depressed flower.
and if you don't mind, also read and give some comments on:
-grateful friend
-my last words
-corruptor and farmer
-she's crying, she's waiting
I'll do your poem if you ask me... ^^
Thx a loot... ^^

I did

` Depressed Flower

It'd be nice if you could do

` A Picture Of You

` Drunk on Shadows

& if you want

` Get That Feeling

I enjoyed reading your poem!

There you go.

Could you please review the poems which are as follows?

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=873568
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=873771

Thank you very much.

I ve done with
A Picture Of You
Drunk on Shadows
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=873568
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=873771
Omit My Path and Broken Angel Will
Thx so much ^^