MORE NEW POEMS

My new poem it isnt really a poem its more like a story ... just wanted to get some comments and vote's on my two new poems ..... vote and comment and i will do the same for you... thanks everyone

-Amelia

I did one can u plz do Sweet Death for me. thanks in advance

Hay i did leave comments on both of your poems... and they were really good get sum more people to comment and vote on mine and i will do the same for you .... thanks u guys

-amelia

Hay i did leave comments on both of your poems... and they were really good get sum more people to comment and vote on mine and i will do the same for you .... thanks u guys

-amelia

Okie dokie.
Will you comment on my "Fortune"
Please and thank you :]