WOODEN CHAIRS AND BROKEN PHONES!!!

*i want comments on my poems*
- emptiness pervades
- she is not worth it

THE DEAL IS...
1 for 2
or
2 for 4

*** PLEASE READ EVERYTHING!!!!!! I WONT BE NICE AND GIVE YOU BACK YOUR COMMENTS IF YOU DONT FOLLOW MY RULES!!!!

1.) if you are only going to read ONE poem it MUST MUST MUST be the poem called "emptiness pervades" ...if you only read one and read "she is not worth it" i WONT return the comments
2.) dont be afraid to be honest and give explanations for your critique's
3.) tell me ON THIS FORUM if you have title requests NOT in a message or in the comment
4.) also do not leave me DARK poems or EXPLICT poems about sex or rape because i wont read them i will just choose a different poem; drug and alcohol explict poems are okay

Will you do
Fortune and Fresh Air
For me, dear?
Please and thank you :]

Done, please rate and coment 4 of my latest.

Thanks:)