WOODEN CHAIRS AND BROKEN PHONES!!!

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    18 years ago

    *i want comments on my poems*
    - emptiness pervades
    - she is not worth it

    THE DEAL IS...
    1 for 2
    or
    2 for 4

    *** PLEASE READ EVERYTHING!!!!!! I WONT BE NICE AND GIVE YOU BACK YOUR COMMENTS IF YOU DONT FOLLOW MY RULES!!!!

    1.) if you are only going to read ONE poem it MUST MUST MUST be the poem called "emptiness pervades" ...if you only read one and read "she is not worth it" i WONT return the comments
    2.) dont be afraid to be honest and give explanations for your critique's
    3.) tell me ON THIS FORUM if you have title requests NOT in a message or in the comment
    4.) also do not leave me DARK poems or EXPLICT poems about sex or rape because i wont read them i will just choose a different poem; drug and alcohol explict poems are okay

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    Will you do
    Fortune and Fresh Air
    For me, dear?
    Please and thank you :]

  • Brittany C
    18 years ago

    Done, please rate and coment 4 of my latest.

    Thanks:)