Earn Up To 20 Comments! [xTheEcstasyofSuicidex]

I'm really low on comments and ratings.. And I like what I've been writing. So, tell me what <you> think. =]

Also, the poems look long, but they're a quick read, in my opinion. =]
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Rules:
`No one liners.
`No love or friendship.
`Leave titles or I won't do them.
`Follow these rules.
`If you write cliche poetry, don't bother.
`Enjoy. =]

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In order from the ones <I> like the best and think yo would would as well.

Titles [you can do what appeals to you, some, or all]:
01. Find Me A Shortcut [Or Maybe Just Your Kiss]
02. I Pledge Allegiance to the Noose
03. A Schizophrenic Can Fall Too
04. Being a Poet
05. The Autopsy
06. You Can Take The Time to Masturbate
07. Calendar Bible
08. We're All Just A Little Bit Lonely
09. How To Succeed In Business Without Really Trying
10. The Whispers in the Wind
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All comments will be doubled.
Enjoy yourselves. =]
And thank you for your time.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Comments To Do:

Ashleigh Skye
-1. School Through the Popular Kids P.O.V Part 1/15
-2. School Through the Nerds P.O.V Part 2/15
-3. School Through the Sport's Star P.O.V 3/15
-4. School Through the Bully's P.O.V 4/15
-5. School Through the Victim's P.O.V [Male] 5/15
-6. School Through the Victim's P.O.V. [Female] 6/15
-7. School Through the Rebel's P.O.V 7/15
-8. School Through the Poor Kids Eye's 8/15
-9. School Through the Teachers Eye's 9/15
10. School Through the Slow Child's P.O.V 10/15
11. School Through the Parent's P.O.V. 11/15
12. School Through the Drops Out's P.O.V 12/15
13. School Through the Principal's Eyes 13/15
14. School Through the Crazy Kid's P.O.V. 14/15
15. A Hunters Epitaph
16. Invisible Boundaries and Electric Fences
17. In The Cold Light of Mourning
18. Learning To Fall
19. Graffiti Backdrop
20. The Ghosts of Tomorrow

Jason
-1. Wondering How To Live
-2. Whispers in the Wind
-3. Picture Frame
-4. Cold Dark World
-5. What Happened
-6. Loosing Sight
-7. Wanting Change
-8. Poet
-9. Body
10. Twister and the Drunk Man
11. Story Book Life
12. Missing the Past

Hey, i left an honest, heartfelt comment. I liked what i read.
please comment and vote my latest "your subconscious choir"
thanks
=] its appreciated.
xoxxo

Sure thing.
And.
Thank you. I really enjoyed the comment; it was long and well thought out. I really appreciate it.
And.
I'll do two of yours, if you want. =]

Oh.
And it made it sound like you meant we didn't get along or something in the comment...What was that about? =/. If we hated each other, I don't remember. So. Haha.

And I just read your poem. F. Dude, that was amazing. Thank you for the wonderful read. I'd hint if you read some more of mine and make me read about three more of yours, I'll bet you'll end up on my favorites if all your poems are like that.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Done, I did 5 of your poems. Please rate and comment

Party Time
Hypocrite
Slipped Away
Looking In The Mirror
The Little Sparrows
Finally Over
Dark Heart
Dragon
I Try
and
Goodbye Pain

Thanks

For now since it is getting late I did one that I haven't done yet lol
Could u plz do these two for me
*Knife, Blood, Nightmare
*The Darkest Nights
I did both of theem for a contest, I hope they aren't cliche, or at least i don't think they are thanks in advance.

I did 2 of yours. can you please do the following of mine. and please rate too as i rated yours.

You'll Never See
Why Did I Trust You?
You're Not Alone
Just Wanna Be Me

Did 1 :) Could you do:
Little girl.
Little things that make us smile.

Thank you! :)

Wow.
Thanks for the great response, you guys.
That's the most comments I've had in sometime. [I had a lot of others from another person so I ended up with about 30-40 comments to wake up to. It was delightful.]
Anyways.
Thank you once again.
Keep in mind.
I have all your comments to do, about ten to twenty others of someone who just commented my poetry from awhile ago, and I have a contest going I must judge.
So.
Stick with me and don't worry.

Also.
If you have a love or friendship poem up, I will not do it. Just clarifying.
Thank you guys so much for all your time. =)

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I did "Find Me A Shortcut" and "The Autopsy" plus that one - "Eden - A Better Place" even though its not on the list. I'd like you to comment on Falling Off Cloud Nine, and When Does Dawn Turn To Day? the others can be any of you choice (preferable ones without any comments). If my comment on the Eden one counts, please do "Golden Shaft" plus one more of your choice. Thanks!

Alright.
Everyone's done so far.
Any other takers?
I'd really like to know what you think.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I'm SO proud of you!
Leave me titles, biotch!
xD

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Ok i read 6 of yours so i was wandering if you can do

1.wondering how to live
2.missing you
3.picture frame
4.cold dark world
5.what happned
6.loosing sight
7.wanting change
8.poet
9.body
10.twister and the drunk man
11. story book life
12.missing the past

thank you i will really appreciate it = ] sorry im to tired to read all of your poems

Ok wait i need to change one of my poems lmao.. i didnt read your rules ^^ ok so instead of missing you

2. missing you <------cross that out
2. change it to whispers in the wind thank you = ]

You know what i jsut noticed i didnt have to write these extra responses even this one is pointless cause i could have just edited the one i did
^_^ shows how smart i am

Haha, Jason.
It's ok.
And I'll get yours done when I have more time.

Are there any more takers in the mean time?

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Haha ok thanks = ]

Yes! I found it!
Ahhaha!
And I'll be getting to /these/ as well.
Thank /you/ for being so patient.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I did ya some. Could you do for me -

Positive Panic!
and
Dee Ebil

Tanks alot,
~Richi~