HELP ME OUT.. please?... poem being published

New poem... possibility of being published... please give me some feedback. for anyone who commented on my other ones.. I will return the comments I am just short on time.. thanks. :)

There you are, all set.

If it's not too much trouble, could you comment "Strip Me Clean."

Thanks alot, it means much.

Done. Great poem. 5/5 from me.

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=910142

Thanks!