I just feel like my stuff doesn't flow all too well!

  • Ashlee Nicole
    19 years ago

    Now see some of the stuff I write...I feel like it just, well doesn't flow! I mean I don't care about rhyming all that much...It's just Is there like something I can do to help it all kinda have that flow, the rythym..I love it when a poem has this rythm like it all just doesn't stop, as if it were a song, CONSTANTLY moving!
    Help Please, And Thank you--Ashlee--

  • Ashlee Nicole
    19 years ago

    Interesting, Yes I see where your coming...I mean but it's like the whole thing just sometimes doesn't seem to have this power..lol..I love powerfull poems..Ya know...I just well I wish it could have that powerfull flow...lol