Serious need of some advice for a moment

My friend gave me this qoute and she says that somehting is missing but she doesn't know what. i was wondering if you could give some tidbits and your thoughts on it.

I have green eyes.
I'm a little stubborn.
I speak my mind.
I love a boy and if
you asked him, he wouldn't
know the color of my eyes.

Anyone?

Well, If you ask me I find it a little confusing...
It stars out a description
then it turns into asking crush if they know the color of her eyes

maybe if you change the description into more about the boy,
like switch it around

I love a boy
and if you ask him
he wouldnt know the color of my eyes
I am a little stuborn
and I speak my mind
but he wouldnt know the color of my eyes
they are green

And then add some other stuff..
sorry if that didnt help...