Serious need of some advice for a moment

  • UnToLd TrUtH
    18 years ago

    My friend gave me this qoute and she says that somehting is missing but she doesn't know what. i was wondering if you could give some tidbits and your thoughts on it.

    I have green eyes.
    I'm a little stubborn.
    I speak my mind.
    I love a boy and if
    you asked him, he wouldn't
    know the color of my eyes.

  • UnToLd TrUtH
    18 years ago

    Anyone?

  • shatteredsoul
    18 years ago

    Well, If you ask me I find it a little confusing...
    It stars out a description
    then it turns into asking crush if they know the color of her eyes

    maybe if you change the description into more about the boy,
    like switch it around

    I love a boy
    and if you ask him
    he wouldnt know the color of my eyes
    I am a little stuborn
    and I speak my mind
    but he wouldnt know the color of my eyes
    they are green

  • shatteredsoul
    18 years ago

    And then add some other stuff..
    sorry if that didnt help...