New poem needs critiquing

"The Uncertainty of Hope"

So... my sixth poem is done (I think). let me know what you guys think. I, of course, will reciprocate with as many as you read and comment on.
Also, I don't know how people can read an entire poem and write one sentence, but if you choose to do so then I'll do the same for yours. ;)

Responded to the comment *and edited my poem... again ... *sigh*