New poem: alvina marsha (acrostic); will return favor if you as

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unknown
18 years ago

Please read my "alvina marsha (acrostic)".
This is my first acrostic poem, so i need comments and suggestions... ^^
My others poem:
Father I don't see the world
depressed flower
She's crying, she's waiting
my last words
corruptor and farmer
grateful friend

-leave a comment if you don't mind... ^^
i'll do yours if you ask me...
Thanks you very much... ^^

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unknown
18 years ago

Thx for they who comment on my poem...
Anyone else? ^^

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- Name : Tricky Daze
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Tricky Daze
18 years ago

I did..could you please do that's the deal?
Thanks alot
Laura

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unknown
18 years ago

Thx laura.. ^^

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unknown
18 years ago

Done too.. ^^ Thx...

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unknown
18 years ago

Anybody? ^^

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