New poem: alvina marsha (acrostic); will return favor if you as

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    Please read my "alvina marsha (acrostic)".
    This is my first acrostic poem, so i need comments and suggestions... ^^
    My others poem:
    Father I don't see the world
    depressed flower
    She's crying, she's waiting
    my last words
    corruptor and farmer
    grateful friend

    -leave a comment if you don't mind... ^^
    i'll do yours if you ask me...
    Thanks you very much... ^^

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    Thx for they who comment on my poem...
    Anyone else? ^^

  • Tricky Daze
    18 years ago

    I did..could you please do that's the deal?
    Thanks alot
    Laura

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    Thx laura.. ^^

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    Done too.. ^^ Thx...

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    Anybody? ^^