Honest Feedback 1 for 2, 2 for 3

Hey everyone,
Id appreciate honest feedback on my latest poems please. In return ill do 2/3 of your poems.

- No explicit poems please.
- No one liners or anything of the sort. Unless your comment shows me youve acctually read the poem i wont return.
- I want honesty. So be as nasty and mean as you want. I dont care. I want to improve and honesty will help me improve.

Please and thank you! :)

Hey,
I did two of yours could you just comment and rate... losing you..and Fallin in {love} and anyother one you wish...thanks!