Could use some advice

Hi, i have this "friend" who has been a c*w, she wrote a poem about me and posted it to me. i wrote her one back. i was wondering what you think. i needed to express my feelings about her (all of which are true) in a good way while letting her know the truth!

thank you

Ariel

p.s. its called kathryn i hate you

Hahaha... umm... hahaha... ok seriously - you're not too good with being subtle are you? :)

Do you reckon you could have a look at my poem The Captains Daughter? Its one I just wrote and still not too sure of if I like it or not - may need some work on it. Thanks! Hope things work out ok between you and Kathryn! xx

Hehehe its all up to u!