Poem contest in skewl

  • Rachael/7MidniteTears
    20 years ago

    hi guys 'n' gals. everyone here are really good poets. we are having a poetry contest at our skewl and they don't allow depressing/sad/dark poems. and basically those are the kind of poems i write. well i decided to submit a love one. but the problem is that i need an ending (im just asking for one line. not a stanza) well here is the beginning and i just need a last line and make sure the ending word rhymes w/ pretend.

    Romeo Romeo
    Save me from this place
    Are you here to rescue me?
    I've been waiting to see your face

    Romeo Romeo
    Watch out for the beast
    If you slay the dragon
    I will be realeased

    Romeo Romeo
    You are almost there
    If I were Rapunzel
    I would let down my hair

    Romeo Romeo
    This is all just pretend
    But I wish you came sooner
    (For now is my end)-won't let me have this part

    THANK YOU EVERYONE

  • Shana
    20 years ago

    For my heart needs to mend...

    lol i like that poem good job... hopefully u like my line... lol

  • Shana
    20 years ago

    O and I hope you win!

  • Rachael/7MidniteTears
    20 years ago

    thanks so much bob and shana. you both are a lot of help.