Running straight towards hell

My best poem in ages, or so i'd like to think.

Firstly, I wrote this for a contest and thanks to Teria for coming up with this title because from it i believe i came to write a very good poem.

Secondly, Id like some honest comments, and no one liners, what you say means alot to me, and helps me to write better.

ThirdlY, I will return the favour asap, and please take into account i share this computer with my younger sister, and i work, so it may be a few days before you recieve the comment.

Thank you and get commenting on " Running straight towards hell"

Love Tara-Kay

P.S. This is just a fictional poem and is not taken from any real life event