New poem plz tell me if its good!!!!

  • Loved In Hell
    18 years ago

    Plz tell me i can take brutal comments i just wanna know if its any good

    Thin Ice

    plz and thank you
    i will return the favor like triple i swear

  • Nix
    18 years ago

    Done, very good poem.

    Can you please r/r/c my two latest?

  • Sweet Fragility
    18 years ago

    Haha i already did..

    remember comment 'my only one'

  • NyellMoonlight
    18 years ago

    Done, great one, I really enjoyed!
    Please r/r/c mine, called:
    1. Please...
    2. The sweetest twist
    Thanks a lot!

  • Loved In Hell
    18 years ago

    Got them all done

    anyone else wanna check out my poem??

  • Sweet Fragility
    18 years ago

    Thank u 4 the comment =)

  • Loved In Hell
    18 years ago

    No prob if you need anything else please tell me