A troubled Soul with nowhere to hide (Parts 1-5 Combined)

Hello guys,
I have completed the series "A troubled soul with nowhere to hide" and have combined all 5 parts into one poem, to make it easier to comment on, so i'd like it if you could comment and rate.
I wasnt sure whether all 5 parts would flow well together, so id like some honest comments.

Thank you and take care,
All my love, Tara-Kay
x

Oh and i will return the favour asap, hold me to that, if you want.

Anyone feel like commenting?

I DID TARA.
before I even seen this.
Lmfao.
IT WAS AMAZING.
Keep up the great work, sweetttie. :]

Thank you so much.

Anyone else is truly welcome to comment!