DEAL DEAL DEAL DEAL DEAL

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Ok guys let us do a deal.

    You rrc my latest funny piece called Love is a burden plus any number of my poems. I will return the favour with a bonus vote and a comment. If you rrc 1 I will do 2 and, 2 for 3, 3 for 4 and so on.

    Rules plse:
    1. NO oneliners
    2. Must vote honestly
    3. Leave links or PM me for specific poems
    4. Critique with a sound mind and heart with honesty
    5. Tell me the number of my poems you have done

    Thanks guys. I hope though LOVE IS A BURDEN, these rules are not a burden for you :). So lets get it started right???

    With love
    Fsams

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Hello ppl, any one????? where are the poets????

  • my name is Llama
    18 years ago

    I did one of your's

    could you please do

    1. venomous poison succeeds
    2.a birthday with a twist

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Yeah its done. Any one else??

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Remember, the more you do, the more you get.....

  • Eternal
    18 years ago

    Ok i will do it

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Thanks for the comment Eternal I have done your poem. Any one else????

  • BECCA lessTHANthree
    18 years ago

    Hey i did 2 can you please do
    - sensual stares
    - emtiness pervades
    - moments to memories