Comments, comments, favour returned

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    2 of my poems, need some honest comments

    "Useless Beauty" is about forgetting that there is pure beauty inside ourselves, and is something i'll always believe.

    "Beautiful Baby" is a poem that i wrote to a dear friend who is finding life tough at the moment, and i wanted to give her some hope and show her that i am there always.

    I will return the favour asap, leave titles if you want or i will just comment any 2 i like.

    love always, Tara-Kay

  • my name is Llama
    18 years ago

    Done

    could you please do:

    1.venomous poison succeeds
    2.a birthday with a twist

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    Thank you, and i did yours

    Anyone else is truly welcome.
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    Yeah those two are really nice. I did them with all my heart. Could you plse do these poems. If you have already done, cou can opt your choice.

    1. Love is a burden
    2. Englidh for the confused

    Thanks a lot