I am yours!!! Written for my girlfriend X2 favours

I have an Etheree called I am yours. It is a special poem for me coz I wrote it for my gf. could you plse review it for me, I will double the favour.

Remember to vote and NO oneliners plse.

Be wise and honest in your judgement. Leave titles or just let me opt the choice.

Tc

Thanks for all your support
fsams

Helo any 1?