The feeling of loss

I recently built up the courage to let my nanny nise read this poem i wrote.. she couldn't speak all she did was cry.. i don't know if she liked it or not.. and and.. i don't know.. i just want some more opinions on this poem
rrc 4 rrc of course
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=909395

thanks guys.x

Wondeful.

As the above person said. You took a big step. I hope your ok.

And if you could please do `Solace:within his arms.It would be great.
Thankyou.
Elaine.

Ok all done
thanks
anyone else?

Me =) I did yours it was very beautiful =)

can you do any of my featured poems,

kisses stephanie