Need comment please...

  • Bug1219
    18 years ago

    I really need some comments and i could use all the advise i can get with my writing.. and ill comment back on how ever many poems you comment on mine...

    thanks!!

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    I'll do 2 of yours,
    you can do any of mine, thanks
    x

  • Michelle18
    18 years ago

    I did one...

    comment any one of mine that catches your eye.. thanx

    ~michelle~

  • Bug1219
    18 years ago

    Oh come one i really could use the advise so please comment or message or summin!

  • unknown
    18 years ago

    I did "here i am". Please do "alvina marsha (acrostic)". Thx..

  • ECILA ice
    18 years ago

    I did two of your poems. Hopefully, you'll read at least one of my poem.Thanx