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*The One I Love
*When It Comes To Loving You[[Tanka]]
^^Two poems I would love commented and rated
rules:
1.No one liners
2.Comment and rate the correct poems.
3.No explicit poems
4. Be honest
5. Private message me your poems when you are done!!.
*PUT "HI" in your thread!!!!before you start.
Thanks. Now..start commenting and rating

Um..anyone?