Mindslaver

I have a new poem about detached reality, its called

mindslaver.

let me know what you think.

if your up for my poem than i will return the favor.
no one liners....
no rate no return.

Tom

Sounds good.

Can you please do...

`The Moon temptress.

It would mean alot to have your feedback seeing as I wrote this peice out of imagination not experience.

Thanks,
Elaine.

Alright,

anyone else?