Hopals Rates and Comments.. Post your poems here

Ok this is simple. Please Post the Links to your poems or there names below and I will Read, Rate, Comment/ Critique them.. All my ratings and comments are fair..

I would also Like if you would r/r/c these poems for me.

Then I Called on Jesus
Liberated - From the adversary
There is a Light in me
We wanted.

Thanks

Ok Im in the mood for rating.. sooo post your poems here

Sweet Love's Deceit
Undesirable Reality

Please and Thanks

GG23

I've Just posted a comment on Sweet Love deceit
I love your style and the poem was well written.

Could u read
the gun,
the lost child,
writer of the night and it or any one u want to

Rose I commented and voted on the 'Writer of the night' poem.

I want to make it clear that I am not doing a comment for a comment thing.. Just post your poems here and I'll select a few, critique and vote.. My comments are usually different from the usual great poem. The truth is important to me, so if the poem sucks I will let you know..

Hopal

To PositiveAspect>> I read your poem "In every Christian lies an Atheist" and I am please to see how you use such a controversial topic and write such a poem. folks the poem was well written and he presented his opinion in a mature fassion and I like it..

To Razen>> I commented on the 'Hope is found in my life' poem.. Its simply written yet conveyed a great message of hope

N.B. I will reply here. after I have commented on each poem.