She hurt me (Revised) Needind comments!!

Name : Fsams
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Joined : Feb 28, 2007
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Fsams
18 years ago

I would love to get your feedback on my revised poem She hurt me.

Plse do vote and leave titles or I will pick my choice.

Thanks
Honest comments will get a bonus comment :)
Fsams

- Name : Fsams
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Feb 28, 2007
- Posts : 1026
Fsams
18 years ago

Any one plse???

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- Name : Fsams
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Feb 28, 2007
- Posts : 1026
Fsams
18 years ago

Come on people

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She hurt me (Revised) Needind comments!!