What can you say??

[i have a new poem... and i wonder if some of you already read my work... but still i want to post it here in my forum... what can you say about my work? any comments and suggestions? i will wait for your feedback... thank you]

I don't care if you don't love me by Dian

i don't care if you don't love me
although i am deeply loving you.

i don't care if you will hurt me
no matter how much pain i will get into it.

and i don't care how thousands tears i produces
as long i see you OK, don't mind me...

i don't care if you don't care about me
and you don't like me...
as long i see you safe I'm happy already

i don't care if you love someone and not me
even if my heart was tearing into pieces
i will ignore them all just for you...

i don't care if you don't see me
even if i am in front of you
coz for you i am invisible

i don't care if you do not hear me too
while I'm saying i love you

i don't care if you are totally blind
to my feeling's for you
anyways, i will still make you feel the warm of me...

no matter what will people advice me
to change my direction
to avoid of seeing you
i won't follow them
but my heart that i will do...

don't mind my heart
even if it's already dying little by little
it's OK coz for me my life has no meaning
until i found you

i don't care who is the one you love
even if you use me just for stuffs...

i don't care if you just knew me if you are sad
and if you are alone and wants to cry out loud...

i will allow you to use my shoulder for you to cry on...
even if wanna cry too, with such the same pain...
i will be strong just only for you

only you that i love
only my dear that i cherish
the one who makes me smile
and the one who said that ill be his only one
even for you it's just for fun
it's OK i will love you no matter what...

i don't care if you cheat on me
even if you blame me in such foolishness i did not do
ill be your armor to protect you

maybe the way i love a person like you is wrong
cos it's liked loving and living hell
i don't care, coz this foolishness i did all for loving you...

and i will be crazy if i won't admit
the true feeling that i have found on you...

i don't care
i really don't care
as long that i love you
that's why i care

don't blame me
I'm just truly deeply in love with you

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