Need some objective opinions

R/r/c plz, - I revised a poem and want to know what you guys think. If you would like me to return the favor just leave a name of one of your poems. thanks

name of revised poem - "Unsteady"

Will do
needing you close
thx

Done and voted. plse do

English for the confused(76)

Submission date : 2007-05-25
Last edit : 2007-05-26

Visits : 5957
Votes : 56
Rating : 4.7

Thanks a lot

PLease do:

-Beautiful Sorrow-

TY!

<3 Liz <3

Thanks Kaila, I critiqued yours.

I'll get to the others ASAP, but I'm having a busy weekend, give me time!

Thanks Fsams, I commented on your poem

Thank you xXEphemeralSoulXx, I commented on your poem, "Beautiful Sorrow"