The Ideal Deal

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    You comment me, real opinions and critique, and I'll comment you. You comment two of my poems, I comment three of yours. You comment six of my poems, I comment eight of yours. You comment twelve of my poems, I comment 16 of yours. Etc.

    :) Take me up anyone? First, seventh, and twelfth posters get a free comment.

  • Teria
    18 years ago

    Done, dear.
    I did six.
    Could you do:
    `* My Photoshop Tastes Like Beverage.
    `* I'm gonna make it through.
    `* I'm gonna make it through [[NumberTwo]]
    `* I'm gonna make it through [[NumberThree]]
    `* Just Remember.
    `* Joking with the joker.
    `* 13th Floor Elevators.
    `* Merry Go Round.

    Thanks, dear. :]

  • Fsams
    18 years ago

    I did two of your poems. I voted also

    Plse do

    1. English for the confused
    2. Thats the deal candy
    3. Thank you

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    Thanks everyone! You really are too nice and I'm glad you all seemed to enjoy what you read. Your criticism helps and its nice to know what people think. I'll be adding more poems later in the night.

    I'm currently commenting and I hope I get more deals. :)

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    Remember all! If you are the seventh or twelfth poster you can still get a free comment!

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    I've received some comments from others who didn't reply here. If you're one of those people know I am grateful and will comment you, but I do prefer if you reply here so that I don't forget.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Sure, I'll do it.
    But would you like to leave any special titles for me?
    I'll do the 12 deal. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    I'll do 12

    my poems...
    I wish..
    Fish in the sea
    Invisible
    Aunt Lori
    Nightmare called childhood
    Needing you close
    Dreams and reality
    You I will yearn
    Summer bliss
    Desire
    Summer Nights
    Daddy's little girl
    Daddy's story
    Lost without you
    He got what he wanted
    I wanna boy

    thx!!

  • Angela
    18 years ago

    Okay ill do two poems.. and ill do one for free..
    so can you do three of mine??
    thanks .. just make sure you pick one funny one.. one love one and one life one.. thanks soo much :)

  • Kaila
    18 years ago

    Done your a fantabulous writer!

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    Okay! I'll give you all your comments, but I'm afraid I might not have time tonight. If not, I'll do it tomorrow.

    To xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex:
    No, I don't care to leave titles. I prefer to have people read whatever intrigues them, but try to comment on any poems that you see don't have any comments. :) Thanks! I'll be adding more poems tonight or, most likely, tomorrow after I finish up all the comments I owe. *sweat*

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Am I the 7th poster? lol If I am could you plz just r/r/c my poem Lovers and Liars thanks! if not, oops! :]

    Ciao

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    Yes, you're the seventh poster. Will do just as soon as I'm up to date on the other comments I owe. :)

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    Okay, I've just started Kaila's comments. I'll be caught up in a bit and hoping for more deals! I have so many poems, enough is just never enough.

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    Still owe:

    Nothing!

  • Serina the Squid
    18 years ago

    Sorry it took so long, guys! Any new takers?