New poems please rrc for rrc x2

Ok yeah liek the title says for every poem you read of mine ill rrc double the amount if you dont like my poems please tell me what you see wrong with it... i am a constantly changing and improving poet well sometimes getting worse lol but yeah thats because i always change my style lol...

the only rule is you have to read atleast one of my TWO newest (that means the two newest not any one of my most recent but the very newest ones) ones and comment and rate them thank you