OneOfMyBestYet. [xTheEcstasyofSuicidex] [10.for.3]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    The first poem is a favorite of the ones I've written. (That's saying a lot.) Tell me what you think, I'd really like to know.
    You can do one title individually and get that number of comments, or you can do all three and get two extra comments. Your choice! =]
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    Rules:
    `Leaves titles to do, or I won't do them.
    `No love or friendship due to the fact that the site won't let me do them.
    `No one lined comments; actually read the poem!
    `Tell me what it made you think of.. go deep (this saves me from one line comments).
    `Enjoy!

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    Titles:

    5 Comments:
    o1. And I Shall Love You, Until I Love No More

    2 Comments:
    o2. What's Left Is Yours, I Promise.

    1 Comment:
    o3. There's This Star, You See
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    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

    Comments To Do:

    Nikki:
    o1.I Cannot Make You Love Me.
    o2. Erased.
    o3. A Father's Dying Dream.
    o4. The Lies Of A Smile.
    o5. When I Look Into A Mirror.

    Ciao The Hoochie x3:
    o1.Guilty Pleasures [[Explicit]]
    o2.Personal Torture [[Sad]]
    o3.Just Don't Let Me Fall [[Love-moved to Misc]]
    o4.Lovers and Liars [[Explicit]]
    o5.You're Beautiful, To Me [Lyrics] [[Love-moved to Misc]]
    o6.Don't Call It A Comeback [Rondel] [[Friendship-moved to Misc]]
    o7.Everything's Just Wonderful [Lyrics] [[Life]]
    o8.Hoochie and the Pool Table [[Explicit]]
    o9.Hoochie and the Pool Table Part 2 [[Explicit]]
    10.She Thinks My Tractor's Sexy [[Love-moved to Misc]]

    Synh:
    o1. Lonely

  • nikki
    18 years ago

    Hey i did And I Shall Love You, Until I Love No More

    could you please do

    -i cannot make you love me
    -erased
    -a fathers dying dream
    -the lies of a smile
    -when i look into the mirror

    please and thanks and i loved your poem, but i guess you should have figured that out by now. thanks again

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Anyone else?

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Sheena, because I LOVE your work, I shall do them ALL! :) hehe

    I'll have to find some poems, or just move ones that I want comments on into like Misc until you comment them. I have a lot of love & friendships but you can't see them, so I shall move the ones I would love a comment on. :]]

    Here ya go:

    1.Guilty Pleasures [[Explicit]]
    2.Personal Torture [[Sad]]
    3.Just Don't Let Me Fall [[Love-moved to Misc]]
    4.Lovers and Liars [[Explicit]]
    5.You're Beautiful, To Me [Lyrics] [[Love-moved to Misc]]
    6.Don't Call It A Comeback [Rondel] [[Friendship-moved to Misc]]
    7.Everything's Just Wonderful [Lyrics] [[Life]]
    8.Hoochie and the Pool Table [[Explicit]]
    9.Hoochie and the Pool Table Part 2 [[Explicit]]
    10.She Thinks My Tractor's Sexy [[Love-moved to Misc]]

    =]

    Ciao<3

  • Synh
    18 years ago

    I read 'There's This Star, You See' but you've read all of my poems so I only have one that you haven't done yet.

    'Lonely'

    Can you read it and be completely honest... wait... why am I telling you this? You're the queen of honest comments lol.

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Hey, just bringing attention to a great poet and some great poems. Do her this favor guys!!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I'll get to these probably tonight, guys, no worries.
    I've just been busy.

    Thanks so much for all the honest comments!

    ANYMORE? =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    And Adorable x3--

    Thank you so much. That's so sweet and kind of you! Do I owe you any comments? If so, list them! x33

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Hello Sheena. It's me Ciao. I change my name and picture too much. lol I commented on al of them... I had two names. BetterThanMex3 and Ciao The Hoochie x3

    But I'm aDORKable x3 now. :) Sorry for the confusion dear.
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    Sheena, because I LOVE your work, I shall do them ALL! :) hehe

    I'll have to find some poems, or just move ones that I want comments on into like Misc until you comment them. I have a lot of love & friendships but you can't see them, so I shall move the ones I would love a comment on. :]]

    Here ya go:

    1.Guilty Pleasures [[Explicit]]
    2.Lipgloss and Black [Lyrics] [[Sad]]
    3.Just Don't Let Me Fall [[Love-moved to Misc]]
    4.Lovers and Liars [[Explicit]]
    5.You're Beautiful, To Me [Lyrics] [[Love-moved to Misc]]
    6.Don't Call It A Comeback [Rondel] [[Friendship-moved to Misc]]
    7.Everything's Just Wonderful [Lyrics] [[Life]]
    8.Hoochie and the Pool Table [[Explicit]]
    9.Hoochie and the Pool Table Part 2 [[Explicit]]
    10.She Thinks My Tractor's Sexy [[Love-moved to Misc]]

    =]

    Ciao<3

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Btw I changed one of the titles from my original post. :)

  • Stephanie Naylor
    18 years ago

    Why is this in read and rate , shouldnt it be in contests?? just asking

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    No, because she asked us to read her work and in return, she reads ours. I believe it fits :)

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    C'mon guys! Read her work!!! lol :)