Pls read my very first poem...

  • gleizza
    18 years ago

    Its my first time to compose a
    poem
    try to look at it...!!
    I want to enhance my skills so I hope that you'll help me by giving me comments,suggeston etc.

    thenkz.....

  • ECILA ice
    18 years ago

    You can do that just have enough determination. and hey done checking yours and voting it..hopefully you'll have time checkng mine. "walking away". thank u