Please come, I need feedback. (only if you like rap)

I wrote a rap "She Deserves Much Better (Rap)", so picture it to a beat. It's kind'a fast, so I hope you can understand it all. Let me know what you think, I'll return the favor, just leave titles, but don't overload me please. thx. peace.

-Liz-

Only:
-Sad
-Dark
-Slang
-Life

thx

Please, anyone?
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