Ok quick deal.....dont miss out...

Comment my poems

*in a pool of blood
*crimson red
*daddy please accept me

and i will comment 10 of yours

FIRST FOUR PEOPLE ONLY..

rules:

*no one liners..if so expect the same in return
*must vote or will not vote on yours
*be completely honest..dont tell me things you think i want to hear..thats not what i want.. i can handle harsh critique...
* leave titles or i'll do random

ok so who's first?

Me!!

ok done.

Ok thank you so much...i will get to yours as soon as possible..

Okay thanks so much, i'll read yours promise!! and rate and comment, woot!!

Lol...ok *livin in a lonely hell*i commented 4 of yours so far..i will finish the rest first thing in the morning.

Thanx for the comments alissa and i will do yours in the morning..i'm going to my cousins house for the night and she doesnt have a computer..but i promise i will do them in the morning...any specific ones??

Alrighty, you are really talented, i really did feel like crying in your poem about the daughter. You did wonderfully, it was so great!
And well, please read "A flow Of Death"
that's my newest, and anything really that catches your eye. Thanks so much, you did a fantastic job, I think i'll read more of your poetry!

Ok im so sorry that its taking me so long to do your comments everyone but my computer has been messed up and i just got it fixed..so i will comment them now... and again im sorry.

Ok I believe I am the 4th person I have done yours I don’t mind which of mine you do I haven’t been righting long so they might not be very good put any advice on improving would be much appreciated.

Ok thanx everyone and this is now closed.

Well hm....i have nothing else to do so i will still comment...but this time its 5 instead of 10..

please comment the three that i have listed above.

*crimson red
*daddy please accept me
*in a pool of blood

so anyone?

Anyone?????

I have, can you please comment
- Nothing
-Time
-Happiness
-Morbid Melody
-Pact Suicide. Hate For Life.

Much Love
Greta

I voted too :D
xo

Ok thanx i'll do them now.

Done..and this is now closed..thanx all.