I added a few poems today and I would like to know what you all

I would really love if some of you would take a look at some of my poems and rate and comment them =] Even if you think they are bad I WANT to know...Im trying to improve my stuff and the only way I can do so is if you tell me what I should be doing better! This is the only thing Im some what good at but Im not even CLOSE to where I want to be when it comes to poetry....so please!!!! tell me what you think =] Please and thank you to those who took the time to read this and take a look at my stuff =] Keep in mind some are older so try and look at the newer ones...they are probably alot better =D ~ Maria