Can you all do me a fav and read/comment these poems?

Happiness will never last
Forever she flew
In the wind
Mornings sunshine never comes
Tell me Im a dreamer (song)

Please! And thank you =]
I will read/comment one of yours back aswell =]
I would love if you would do so for me Im trying really hard to get better at my poems and this will help a whole lot. =]

~Maria

Sure of mine could you do his forgotten birthday
sunset (haiku)
and any others that catch your eye

Of course. =]