Can you all do me a fav and read/comment these poems?

  • Maria
    18 years ago

    Happiness will never last
    Forever she flew
    In the wind
    Mornings sunshine never comes
    Tell me Im a dreamer (song)

    Please! And thank you =]
    I will read/comment one of yours back aswell =]
    I would love if you would do so for me Im trying really hard to get better at my poems and this will help a whole lot. =]

    ~Maria

  • Rose not your average
    18 years ago

    Sure of mine could you do his forgotten birthday
    sunset (haiku)
    and any others that catch your eye

  • Maria
    18 years ago

    Of course. =]