Ermm please take a look at this

Hi,
my name is Auna and I really need people to give me some feed back (hopefully it's positive because I really can't take low low ratings or mean comments anymore) so ermm if you read two of my poems I'll read four of yours. . .I don't know how well I will comment on them some times I can write forever about a poem and other times I'm lucky if I can get a sentence in, but I will try if you don't like the 2/4 thing we can change it. . .
Thank - You to any one who actaully took time to read this
Auna

Ok for now, i changed the deal to 1 for 1 , but i will read urs later, please do my lastest poem called (return to my planet)

i also voted a 5/5 cause urs was great.

Ok thank - you I'll read yours tomorrow moring

again thank you very much!

Done.. Nice poem.. :)

how about half of 2/4? So 1/2..
If you don't like it, 1/1 is fine.. :)
-Marsha(double acrostic)
or
-alvina marsha (acrostic)

thx.. :)

Ok I will read them both by the end of the day

=)

Ok i will take a look at two of your poems of mine could you do
his forgotten birthday and looking through the window.
thank you =]