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My boyfriend, Jake, wrote his first poem called ` The Broken Old Man. And It would be really appreciated if you would R/R/C his piece.Which is really good for a first, I posted the link below. In Return I will do 2 of your chosen pieces. Just Pm me the tittles, and I will get on them.

Please No one liner's, or I will get the impression you didn't read it.
And please vote. For I will in return.

Thanks,
Elaine.<3

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=940128

I will do that deal....^_^

1.final song
2.die

thnx in advance

Finished.

Thanks so much.

Common Poet's I would really like too get some comment's on his poem.

Hi i have r/r/c on your boyfriens poem its great could you r/r/c on mine please mid winter flower and bone thanks alot

Finished.

Thanks:)

Elaine.

Done r/r/c the poem. It was great please r/r/c my two poems called:
My Sorrow
Wintry Snow