Not my best work, but needs comments

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    I have 2 new poems, that i have just posted, it isnt my best work, but both of them mean something to me.
    I just would like to know what you think, please be honest, i can take whatever you throw at me.

    The 2 poems are
    "Careless Perfection (Acrostic)"
    "Spoken without meaning"

    Love Tara-Kay
    x